Not too far off. Just some ideas on how to improve a few things.
[Vague... Really he didn't focus much on the papers he had taken out and he ended up starting to try and piece together the information they had about that "owner" and sent off a few texts to some of his men to try and look into it.
But then after that there wasn't much else he could do other than wait. Only belatedly he recalls what he ended up "working on" and he can only hope in his haste the paper got covered up—]
And you?
[He looks at her carefully, his voice softening a little.]
no subject
[Vague... Really he didn't focus much on the papers he had taken out and he ended up starting to try and piece together the information they had about that "owner" and sent off a few texts to some of his men to try and look into it.
But then after that there wasn't much else he could do other than wait. Only belatedly he recalls what he ended up "working on" and he can only hope in his haste the paper got covered up—]
And you?
[He looks at her carefully, his voice softening a little.]