[Again he smiles with that warm pride as he watches her. He was fairly confident that she would like it, but there was always the question of whether it would really be enough or if there could be something else. So to see her again so pleased and in awe of it helps alleviate some of those doubts.]

I tried to keep everything you've told me in mind. But if there's anything you want to change, just say the word and I'll do my best.